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Describe a day out that you enjoyed recently

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It was two years ago that I went to Ao Vua swimming pool. I went out with my grandmother, my mom, my aunt and my younger brother. My grandfather wanted to finish his work in the local where we live, so he didn't join us. At Ao Vua swimming pool, we participated in many outdoor games like playing in the ball house, riding on the swings, sliding grass. . . and especially, we went swimming at the hot and cold pool. My grandmother preferred swimming at the hot pool than cold ones because she thought hot water was better for her health. At there, we could eat much delicious food, the waiter is friendly. In the general, the day out made me have an interesting experience. Therefore, I love it very much, and I wanted to return Ao Vua swimming pool in the day not far!

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