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The maps show changes to Flexi stone town between 1967 in 2001

The maps show changes to Flexi stone town between 1967 in 2001 qR21D
The picture illustrate the flag the stone changed over the years from 1967 to 2001 A period of 34 years. Overall it can be seen that Golf Course, shops, dunas, hotel and Cafe steel and changed throughout the given Period of the time and there are several things were constructed. Looking at the chat in more detail it is evident that their were shops on either side of the High Street there was also some farm land to the east of the High Street and course course on the west side. The town is bordered by sea in the south and their were dunes in it's south west. There was a hotel near the donors and next to the hotel was a cafe there was a PR to exercise the sea and fish market above it. Timing to the remaining data sets it is clear that the Golf Course was still at yard in 2001 file shops to the west of the High Street remained there the shops to the east of it replaced by apartments the farmland gave away to swimming pool of HAL and tennis courts wind turbines had been erected in the southern part of the town of the tune is the old hotel near the dunas was renovated and used car park the cafe was still there however the Marina and fish market gone abhi was developed in their place and its Eastern most part was converted into a private beach.
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illustrate
the flag the stone
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over the years from 1967 to 2001 A period of 34 years.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that Golf
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Course
,
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shops
,
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dunas
,
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hotel
and
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Cafe
steel and
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changed
throughout the
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given
Period of the time and there are several things
were constructed
.

Looking at the chat in more detail it is evident that their were
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shops
on either side of the High Street there was
also
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some
farm land to the east of the High Street and
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course
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course
on the west side. The town
is bordered
by sea in the south and their were dunes
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in it's south
west. There was a
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hotel
near the donors and
next
to the
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hotel
was a
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cafe
there was a PR to exercise the sea and fish market above it.

Timing to the remaining data sets it is
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clear
that the Golf
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Course
was
still
at yard in 2001 file
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shops
to the west of the High Street remained there the
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shops
to the east of it replaced by apartments the farmland gave away to swimming pool of HAL and tennis courts wind turbines had
been erected
in the southern part of the town of the tune is the
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old
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hotel
near the
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dunas
was renovated
and
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used
car park the
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cafe
was
still
there
however
the Marina and fish market gone
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abhi
was developed
in their place and its Eastern most part
was converted
into a private beach.
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IELTS academic The maps show changes to Flexi stone town between 1967 in 2001

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