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Cinema for Bangladeshi people

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The provided pie charts depict the market share of watching films regarding four forms of watching between 2012 and 2018 while the line graph portraits the cost of watching movies in dollars during the period of 2012 to 2018. Overall, most of the people prefer the illegal download and going to cinema form to watch movies whereas the cost of the illegal form was decreased and cinema ticket form increased over the period. According to pie charts, in 2012, 24 % people prefer to watch movie through the illegal download method followed by a sharp increase (38%) in 2018 and reached a peak. In contrast, the method of watching films through DVD was decreased from 35% in 2012 to 2% in the year of 2018. The figure of cinema ticket method was remained stable (35%) over the period while the percentage of streaming was increased from 6% to 25%. From the line graph, it is seen that the cost of streaming and illegal download method followed a downward trend whilst the cost of DVD and cinema ticket followed opposite from 2012 to 2018. In 2012, streaming method has the highest cost around 35 dollars whereas DVD has the lowest cost amounting 5 dollars. On the other hand, in 2018, people have to spend the maximum cost for cinema ticket and the lowest for illegal download.
The provided pie charts depict the market share of watching films regarding four
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forms
of watching between 2012 and 2018 while the line graph portraits the
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cost
of watching movies in dollars during the period of 2012 to 2018.

Overall
, most of the
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people
prefer the
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illegal
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download
and going to
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cinema
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form
to
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watch
movies whereas the
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cost
of the
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illegal
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form
was decreased
and
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cinema
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ticket
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form
increased over the period.

According to pie charts, in 2012, 24 %
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people
prefer to
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watch
movie through the
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illegal
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download
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method
followed by a sharp increase (38%) in 2018 and reached a peak.
In contrast
, the
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method
of watching films through DVD
was decreased
from 35% in 2012 to 2% in the year of 2018. The figure of
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cinema
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ticket
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method
was remained
stable (35%) over the period while the percentage of streaming
was increased
from 6% to 25%.

From the line graph, it is
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seen
that the
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cost
of streaming and
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illegal
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download
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method
followed a downward trend whilst the
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cost
of DVD and
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cinema
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ticket
followed opposite from 2012 to 2018. In 2012, streaming
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method
has the highest
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cost
around 35 dollars whereas DVD has the lowest
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cost
amounting 5 dollars.
On the other hand
, in 2018,
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people
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have to
spend the maximum
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for
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cinema
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and the lowest for
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illegal
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download
.
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IELTS academic Cinema for Bangladeshi people

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
225 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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