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Explain the map of the future plan

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The map illustrates plan of University sport center in the future. A numerous of the place it will change. First the outdoor courts will be change to the Leisure pool as well as the Changing room at the West of the map, that below and side of the pool, Moreover the sport shop will be side of the changing room. Gym, that will build enlarge from the present As well as café, that will build near the changing room at the East of the map. In the other hand the Outdoor courts, that will not have in the Future plan, In contrary it will instead by the shopping mall as well as it will build the two Dance studios. In due the fact it will have some places, that at the same location, For example Main pool, Reception, Seating and the Changing room, that between the Leisure pool and the Main pool
The map illustrates plan of University sport center in the future.
The phrase 'A numerous of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'A' and 'of'.
A numerous of
the place it will
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change
.
First
the outdoor courts will be
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change
to the Leisure
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pool
as well
as the
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Changing
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room
at the West of the map, that below and side of the
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pool
,
Moreover
the sport shop will be side of the
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changing
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room
. Gym, that will build enlarge from the present
As well
as café, that will build near the
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changing
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room
at the East of the map. In the other hand the Outdoor courts, that will not have in the Future plan, In contrary it will
instead
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by
the shopping mall
as well
as it will build the two Dance studios. In due the fact it will have
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some
places, that at the same location,
For example
Main
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pool
, Reception, Seating and the
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Changing
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room
, that between the Leisure
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pool
and the Main
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pool
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IELTS academic Explain the map of the future plan

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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