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The maps show changes to flex Town

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The given maps depicts the information about changes were happened in Flex town in between year 1967 to 2001. Overview, there were major changes can be seen in year 2001 except some places remained same. It is clear to seen that, in the north side of the map there was aa farm land in year 1967 and in 2001 there was a shopping centre. Further in the south side of the map there was aa lake and it was remained same in both given year. Cafe was in the centre of the map which was remained same in both given years. In the west side of the cafe there was a hotel and house land but in 2001 there was a car park built on the site of hotel and house land. Moreover in the north side of the cafe there were street in both years. In the left and right side of the street there was shops and right side shops remained same in 2001 but left side shops were demolished and apartment was built.
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maps
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changes
were happened
in Flex town in between
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year
1967 to 2001. Overview, there were major
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changes
can be
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seen
in
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year
2001 except
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some
places
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remained
same. It is
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clear
to
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seen
that, in the north side of the
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map
there was
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aa
farm land in
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year
1967 and in 2001 there was a shopping
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centre
.
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Further
in the south side of the
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map
there was
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aa
lake and it was
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remained
same in both
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given
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year
.
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Cafe
was in the
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centre
of the
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map
which was
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remained
same in both
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given
years. In the west side of the
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cafe
there was a hotel and
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house
land
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but
in 2001 there was a car park built on the site of hotel and
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house
land.
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Moreover
in the north side of the
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cafe
there were street in both years. In the
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left
and right side of the street
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there was shops
and right side shops
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remained
same in 2001
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left
side shops
were demolished
and apartment
was built
.
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IELTS academic The maps show changes to flex Town

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176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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