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Energy production by Windmills.

Energy production by Windmills. 6lnWG
The given diagram illustrates the process of generation of electricity in a windmill. Overall, The generator in a windmill, converts the energy of rotating blades into electricity and supplies this to a powerlines. The major componets include high velocity wind, rotor baldes, gearbox, generator, power cable and tranformer. we can deduce from the diagram, the wind energy gives rise to rotation of rotor blades. These blades inturn are connected to the generator through a gear box. The generator produces electricity. The rpm of rotor blades depend up on the velocity of on coming air flow. So the output depends up on velocity of air. In order to maintain a constant rpm the gear box is used. This results in constant rpm of shaft connected to generator. As a result equal amount of energy is produced by the generator. The produced energy is tranmistted through long distance powerlines from power house.
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given
diagram illustrates the process of generation of electricity in a windmill.

Overall
, The generator in a windmill, converts the
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energy
of rotating blades into electricity

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and
supplies this to a
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powerlines
. The major
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componets
include high velocity wind, rotor
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baldes
, gearbox, generator, power cable and
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tranformer
.

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we
can deduce from the diagram, the wind
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energy
gives rise to rotation of rotor blades.

These
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blades
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inturn
are connected
to the generator through a gear box. The generator produces electricity.

The rpm of rotor blades depend up on the velocity of on coming air flow.
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So
the output depends up on velocity of air.

In order to maintain a constant rpm the gear box is
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used
. This results in constant rpm of shaft connected to generator.

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As
a result equal amount of
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energy
is produced
by the generator. The produced
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energy
is
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tranmistted
through long distance
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powerlines
from power
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house
.
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IELTS academic Energy production by Windmills.

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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