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The chart below shows the cost of living averages in two different cities as compared to the national cost of living average Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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I found the chart below to be quite useful after reading it. It provides me with a wealth of information on the average cost of living in two places when compared to the national average. In terms of convenience stores, the cost of living is higher in Riverdale at 4. 7% and in Cape Alicia by 0. 5%. Besides, housing costs in Riverdale reached the highest level at 19% and in Cape Alicia at a very low level of -19%, which shows that buying a house is a very easy thing. In addition, Riverdale has significantly greater levels of utilities, transportation, and clothing than Cape Alicia. This demonstrates that Riverdale has a better level of life as well as greater costs. However, it also has numerous perks, such as increased utility costs, food shops, and health care, all of which contribute to a more pleasant living environment for us. In conclusion, I believe Riverdale is a place worth living in, and I hope to have the opportunity to do so in the future.
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in two places when compared to the national average. In terms of convenience stores, the
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is higher in Riverdale at 4. 7% and in Cape Alicia by 0. 5%.
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in Riverdale reached the highest
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of utilities, transportation, and clothing than Cape Alicia. This demonstrates that Riverdale has a better
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the cost of living averages in two different cities as compared to the national cost of living average

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