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The maps show changes that took place in Youngswille in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngswille in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. wB7rN
The two maps illustrate changes of Youngswille in New Zealland during the 25 years between 1980 and 2005. Overall, it can be seen from the pictures that the area was significantly changed its view. It took an urban style whereas it had been a rural zone. According to maps, the town had been much greener in 1980 but next years in south part from River Alannah all trees were cut down and all houses were emptied their places for other constructions. For instance between the main road and the railway two apartments were built and its left side (south east) it had been a woodland except for Airport and a park but then three factories and a Ware house replaced it and a factory were constructed near to school. We can see a number of significant changes in the north of the River Allanah. The most noticeable is that the woodland was converted into a golf course and around it two car parkings, a park and a stadium were constructed. A Marina took place behind the railway station. And it should be mentioned that railway line in the north east of the River was cut
The two maps illustrate
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changes
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Youngswille
in New
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Zealland
during the 25 years between 1980 and 2005.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
from the pictures that the area was
significantly
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changed
its view.

It took an urban style whereas it had been a rural zone.

According to maps, the town had been much greener in 1980
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but
next
years in south part from River
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Alannah
all trees were
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cut
down and all
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houses
were emptied
their places for other constructions.
For instance
between the main road and the railway two apartments
were built
and its
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left
side (
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south east
) it had been a woodland
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except for
Airport and a park
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but
then three factories and a Ware
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house
replaced it and a factory
were constructed
near to school.

We can
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see
a number of significant
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changes
in the north of the River
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Allanah
. The most noticeable is that the woodland
was converted
into a golf course and around it two car
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parkings
, a park and a stadium
were constructed
. A Marina took place behind the railway station. And it should
be mentioned
that railway line in the
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north east
of the River was
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cut
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IELTS academic The maps show changes that took place in Youngswille in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

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