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The Two MAps Illustrates How A village Called Ryemouth has Developed Over The LAst 25 YEars Overall The Location OF Cafe And Hotel Remain Same Across The Years whilst Shop Have Converted into Resturant.

The Two MAps Illustrates How A village Called Ryemouth has Developed Over The LAst 25 YEars Overall The Location OF Cafe And Hotel Remain Same Across The Years whilst Shop Have Converted into Resturant. oRbNw
The Two MAps Illustrates How A village Called Ryemouth has Developed Over The LAst 25 YEars Overall The Location OF Cafe And Hotel Remain Same Across The Years whilst Shop Have Converted into Resturant. IN Addition, Farmland And Forest Area Was Replaced by SPorts GAmes Golf And Tennis It Can Seen That REsidential Area Have Been Expanded And More Houses have Constructed Whreas Fishmarket was Demolished And And Apartment HAve Build Fishing Port is removed. In 1995 There Was No Parking ARea NEar hOtel But Right Now It IS Located Right Side OF Hotel. It Can BE Observed that farmland Was located In Southeast OF Map HAve Replaced by Golf And Foreset IS Also Chopped DOwn and tennis House HAve Build. However, Cafe And Hotel have Remain Same Juts Opposite of Each Other. Most Remarkable Changes In Sea Fishing Port Was Removed And Now Only Sea is There
The Two
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MAps
Illustrates How A village Called
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Ryemouth
has Developed Over The
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LAst
25
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YEars


Overall
The Location OF
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Cafe
And Hotel Remain Same Across The Years whilst Shop Have Converted into
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Resturant
.
IN Addition
, Farmland And Forest Area
Was Replaced
by
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SPorts
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GAmes
Golf And
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Tennis


It Can
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Seen
That
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REsidential
Area Have
Been Expanded
And More
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Houses
have Constructed
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Whreas
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Fishmarket
was Demolished
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And And
Apartment
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HAve
Build Fishing Port
is removed
.

In 1995 There Was No Parking
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ARea
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NEar
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hOtel
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But
Right
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Now
It
IS Located
Right Side OF Hotel.

It Can
BE Observed
that farmland
Was located
In Southeast OF Map
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HAve
Replaced by Golf And
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Foreset
IS
Also
Chopped
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DOwn
and tennis
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House
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HAve
Build.

However
,
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Cafe
And Hotel have
Use past participle here: "remained".
Remain
Same Juts Opposite of Each Other. Most Remarkable
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Changes
In Sea Fishing Port
Was Removed
And
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Now
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Only
Sea is
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There

IELTS academic The Two MAps Illustrates How A village Called Ryemouth has Developed Over The LAst 25 YEars Overall The Location OF Cafe And Hotel Remain Same Across The Years whilst Shop Have Converted into Resturant.

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6 paragraphs
147 words
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