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e charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie chart compares the proportion of five sorts of books sale by a bookseller during the period from 1972 to 2012. Overall, it can be seen that adult fiction type book sale higher than other types of book. Whereas biography, travel and other category books sold rate was fall down during given time period. In 1972, children’s fiction, adult fiction, and biography books sold proportion rate was same, which was 20% each. Travel and other books sale rate in 1972 at 15% and 25% respectively. Whereas 15% rate lower and 25% rate maximum in 1972. After 1972, adult fiction sold rate increased in 1992 by 5% then it was reached 45% by 2012. This is the highest rate in graph. Also in children’s fiction book sale rate grew up on the contrary at lower rate. The rate was 20%, 22%, and 25% in respective given years. By contrast, biography books sale rate decreased at 20% to extremely small 8% between 1972 and 2012. 15% sold rate of travel books in 1972, then it was increased by 3% in 1992, therefore it was fall down at 12% in 2012.
The three pie chart compares the proportion of five sorts of
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by a bookseller during the period from 1972 to 2012.
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that adult
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type
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higher than other types of
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. Whereas biography, travel and other category
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sold
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was fall down during
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time period. In 1972, children’s
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, adult
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, and biography
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sold proportion
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was same, which was 20% each. Travel and other
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in 1972 at 15% and 25%
respectively
. Whereas 15%
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lower and 25%
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maximum in 1972. After 1972, adult
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sold
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increased in 1992 by 5% then it
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45% by 2012. This is the highest
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in graph.
Also
in children’s
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grew up
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at lower
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. The
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was 20%, 22%, and 25% in respective
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years. By contrast, biography
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decreased at 20% to
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8% between 1972 and 2012. 15% sold
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of travel
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in 1972, then it
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by 3% in 1992,
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it was fall down at 12% in 2012.
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