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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. jR8Mp
The diagram illustrates the past and thepresent proportion of current global population in the year 1950 and 2002 respectively, and the future predicted trend in the year 2050. Overall, the popultion of nations like China, the USA and Japan have been followoing a downward trend whereas India's population is going uphill, reaching nearly 20% of world's population by the year 2050. With regards to the chart, China had the highest number of residents in the 1950 contributing to slighlty above 20% of the global population. However, China's population declined reaching 20% in 2002 and is expected to follow the decreasing trend to contributing only 15% of the earth's residents. Following a similar course, the USA comprised slightly more than 5% of the planet's population to 5% in 2002 and is predicted to contributed similarly in 2050. Further on, Japan follows a similar ternd with population that has always been below 5%. On the contrary, India is observed to follow a disimmilar course. Wherein, the country's residents were believed to contribute 15% of the global population in 1950, rising in 2002 and continuing climbing the population chart to nearly 20% of the planet's residents.
The diagram illustrates the past and
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thepresent
proportion of
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current
global
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population
in the year 1950 and 2002
respectively
, and the future predicted trend in the year 2050.

Overall
, the
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popultion
of nations like China, the USA and Japan have been
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followoing
a downward trend whereas India's
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population
is going uphill, reaching
nearly
20% of world's
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population
by the year 2050.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
the chart, China had the highest number of
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residents
in the 1950 contributing to
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slighlty
above 20% of the global
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population
.
However
, China's
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population
declined reaching 20% in 2002 and is
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expected
to follow the decreasing trend to contributing
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only
15% of the earth's
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residents
. Following a similar course, the USA comprised
slightly
more than 5% of the planet's
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population
to 5% in 2002 and
is predicted
to contributed
similarly
in 2050.
Further
on, Japan follows a similar
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ternd
with
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population
that has always been below 5%.

On the contrary
, India
is observed
to follow a
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disimmilar
course. Wherein, the country's
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residents
were believed
to contribute 15% of the global
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population
in 1950, rising in 2002 and continuing climbing the
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population
chart to
nearly
20% of the planet's
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residents
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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