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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. n6192
The diagram depict the parts and about the locations they are been installed for its efficient working. The blueprint provides the information about production of electricity using Wave energy. The devices are installed based on the quantity of power need to be generated. The output expected to be low for those machines mounted approximately close to the sea shore, where the waves are small and cost of installation is less to that of those planted few kilometers away from the shore with high altitude waves produce appreciable and high outcome. Equal intervals are maintained between these mechanical instruments installed in the oceans. The working of them seems to efficient and durable as they withstand heavy tides from the oceans. The main parts are electricity generator, two turbines covered by chambers. There is a two way openings one at the bottom and other at the top. The air pressure created by the waves at the bottom forces the lower turbine to rotate on its axis faster and same process happens at the top of the device due to air flow from the top portion to rotate the turbine located on the top. These turbines helps the generation of power using the generator and stored successfully for the daily use.
The diagram
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depict
the parts and about the locations they
are been
installed for its efficient working.

The blueprint provides the information about production of electricity using
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Wave
energy.
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The
devices
are installed
based on the quantity of power need to
be generated
.
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The
output
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expected
to be low for those machines mounted approximately close to the sea shore, where the
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waves
are
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small
and cost of installation is less to that of those planted few kilometers away from the shore with high altitude
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waves
produce appreciable and high outcome. Equal intervals
are maintained
between these mechanical instruments installed in the oceans.

The working of them seems to efficient and durable as they withstand heavy tides from the oceans. The main parts are electricity generator, two
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turbines
covered by chambers. There is a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
two way
openings one at the bottom and other at the
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top
. The air pressure created by the
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waves
at the bottom forces the lower
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turbine
to rotate on its axis faster and same process happens at the
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top
of the device due to air flow from the
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top
portion to rotate the
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turbine
located on the
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top
. These
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turbines
You should probably use "help".
helps
the generation of power using the generator and stored
successfully
for the daily
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use
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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3 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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