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The maps show changes in an island between past and present.

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The maps shows a number of changes taking place in an island between past and present. It is clear that the island has changed significantly introduction of tourism, and five new peculiarity can be seen in the next map. The noticeable development is that the island is hotel with swimming pool to stay has been reconstructed instead the scientific research station. Look at the map more detail, we can see that in the east has bee built café. The other physical structures that has been added an open restaurant, in the center of the island, and a lookout to the north east of the open restaurant. Before these developments, in this island were only scientific research station, natural spring and some trees. In addition, the moderation which have been mentioned before, the pier has been moderned, where cruis ships can dock. Finally, there is a designed swimming are for tourists off a beach on the western tip of the island.
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changes
taking place in an
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between past and present.

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clear
that the
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island
has
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changed
significantly
introduction of tourism, and five new peculiarity can be
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seen
in the
next
map. The noticeable development is that the
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island
is hotel with swimming pool to stay has
been reconstructed
instead
the scientific research station.

Look at the map more detail, we can
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see
that in the east has
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bee
built café. The other physical structures that has been
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added
an open restaurant, in the center of the
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island
, and a lookout to the
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north east
of the open restaurant.
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Before
these developments, in this
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island
were
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only
scientific research station, natural spring and
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some
trees.

In addition
, the moderation which have
been mentioned
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before
, the pier has been
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moderned
, where
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cruis
ships can dock.
Finally
, there is a designed swimming are for tourists off a beach on the western tip of the
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IELTS academic The maps show changes in an island between past and present.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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