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The bar chart indicates the total number of to and fro journeys by school students who aged 5- 12, in a nation using various types of transportation (Car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in the years 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart indicates the total number of to and fro journeys by school students who aged 5- 12, in a nation using various types of transportation (Car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in the years 1990 and 2010. DVAJA
The bar chart indicates the total number of to and fro journeys by school students who aged 5- 12, in a nation using various types of transportation (Car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in the years 1990 and 2010. Overall, in the year 1990, the greatest number of school goers used walking as the mode of commute while the least used car, By contrast, a maximum number of pupils used car in the year 2010 while cycling being the least utilized. Firstly, in the year 1990, only about 4 million students have traveled in Cars as passengers while just above 12 million of them have walked to their schools and homes. In addition to the above, they have also used other modes of transport such as Bus, Bicycle and, Walk + Bus in the ranges of 7, 6. 1, and 5. 9 million respectively. Secondly, it is noticeable that the trend is slightly opposite in the year 2010, in which about 11 million children had used Car to get to their schools while only as few as 2 million used Bicycles. Walking stood as the second most preferred way of commute with 6 million students followed by Bus travelers at 5 million and Walking + Bus was just about 3 million.
The bar chart indicates the total number of to and fro journeys by
school
students who aged
5- 12
, in a nation using various types of transportation
(Car
passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in the years 1990 and 2010.

Overall
, in the
year
1990, the greatest number of
school
goers
used
walking as the mode of commute while the least
used
car
, By contrast, a maximum number of pupils
used
car
in the
year
2010 while cycling being the least utilized.

Firstly
, in the
year
1990,
only
about 4
million
students have traveled in
Cars
as passengers while
just
above 12
million
of them have walked to their
schools
and homes.
In addition
to the above, they have
also
used
other modes of transport such as Bus, Bicycle and, Walk + Bus in the ranges of 7, 6. 1, and 5. 9
million
respectively
.

Secondly
, it is noticeable that the trend is
slightly
opposite in the
year
2010, in which about 11
million
children had
used
Car
to
get
to their
schools
while
only
as few as 2
million
used
Bicycles. Walking stood as the second most preferred way of commute with 6
million
students followed by Bus travelers at 5
million
and Walking + Bus was
just
about 3
million
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart indicates the total number of to and fro journeys by school students who aged 5- 12, in a nation using various types of transportation (Car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in the years 1990 and 2010.

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