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Using the ideas in the chart, write a paragraph of at least 120 words about how people in your family share housework.

Using the ideas in the chart, write a paragraph of at least 120 words about how people in your family share housework. 6lwJW
There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. We are too busy: my parents and my sister both work, I spend most of my time studying, so we split the household duties evenly. My dad is in charge of doing heavy lifting and mending things around my house. The majority of cooking and grocery shopping is done by my mum. As the oldest child in my family, I take up a large portion of household chores. Everyday, I am responsible for taking out the rubbish, sweeping the floor and washing the dishes. My sister and my mum prepare the meals, and lay the table for meals. We understand the role of each family member; therefore, we are willing to share the households in order to relieve everyone’s duties, and give us more time to relax.
There are four
people
in my family: my parents, my sister and I. We are too busy: my parents and my sister both work, I spend most of my time studying,
so
we split the household duties
evenly
.

My dad is in charge of doing heavy lifting and mending things around my
house
. The majority of cooking and grocery shopping
is done
by my mum.

As the oldest child in my family, I take up a large portion of household chores.
Everyday
, I am responsible for taking out the rubbish, sweeping the floor and washing the dishes. My sister and my mum prepare the meals, and lay the table for meals.

We understand the role of each family member;
therefore
, we are willing to share the households in order to relieve everyone’s duties, and give us more time to relax.
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IELTS academic Using the ideas in the chart, write a paragraph of at least 120 words about how people in your family share housework.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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