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The maps show a plan of Bridgetown in the year of 1990 and 2007.write a report on it

The maps show a plan of Bridgetown in the year of 1990 and 2007. write a report on it 5AlAe
The given maps depict information about the growth of Bridgetown during year 1990 and 2007. It can be seen from the plans that there were few built-up area in the year 1990, while it was increased in each direction during year 2007. South West direction had agriculture land earlier, but it was converted in built up space. Castle was replaced by school in 2007. On the top of that there was a bridge which connects to south east to north west. However, position of canteen and woods remain unchanged, they were at the same place as they were. Simillarly, bridge was at the same location in the central portion of the small city. Overall, tremendous development was seen in every portion of town over the period of the time with additional facilities of outer connecting ring road, school and new railway track.
The
given
maps depict information about the growth of Bridgetown during year 1990 and 2007. It can be
seen
from the plans that there were few built-up area in the year 1990, while it
was increased
in each direction during year 2007. South West direction had agriculture land earlier,
but
it
was converted
in built up space. Castle
was replaced
by school in 2007. On the top of that there was a bridge which connects to
south east
to
north west
.
However
, position of canteen and woods remain unchanged, they were at the same place as they were.
Simillarly
, bridge was at the same location in the central portion of the
small
city.
Overall
, tremendous development was
seen
in every portion of town over the period of the time with additional facilities of outer connecting ring road, school and new railway
track
.
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IELTS academic The maps show a plan of Bridgetown in the year of 1990 and 2007. write a report on it

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142 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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