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process of making sea water to be drinkable

process of making sea water to be drinkable Q8g5x

The diagram below shows the way how to remove salt from sea water in order to make it drinkable. First of all, it is taken from the ocean and put into the pre-treatment filter to clean. Next, this liquid is gone through the membrane which can filter impurities and salt from it effectively in a high pressure. Then, it is moved to the post-treatment which is included lime, chlorine and fluoride. Lastly, it is stored for integrating water supply system. In this stage, the water molecules is totally separated with the original water. In a pre-treatment step, the salt water can be filter in a backwash and returned to the sea. The membrane has another way as well as which is concentrating the water and return it into the sea. It is not hard to see that these are a lot of steps to make the sea water can be drinkable.

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 the way how to remove salt from sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it drinkable.

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First of all
, it is taken
 from the ocean and put into the pre-treatment filter to clean. Next
, this liquid is gone
 through the membrane which can filter impurities and salt from it effectively
 in a high pressure. Then, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the post-treatment which is included
 lime, chlorine and fluoride. Lastly
, it is stored
 for integrating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 supply system. In this stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 molecules is totally
 separated with the original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. In a pre-treatment step, the salt You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 can be Consider using a past participle here: "filtered".filtered
filter
 in a backwash and returned to the sea. The membrane has another way as well
 as which is concentrating the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and return it into the sea.

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hard
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see
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a lot of
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make
 the sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 can be drinkable. 