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The column graph shows the percentage of males in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The column graph shows the percentage of males in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. 2lpwj
The given bar graph provides the information about the proportion of males who prefer to watching sports, and those men who choose to take part in different types of sports activities in a country. Overall, the percentage of males who prefer to watching sports events are higher than that of men who like to participate in it. However, only in fishing activity men partipants are more than that of watchers. To begin with, the proportion of spectators in football and horse riding and racing are almost similar with around 48% of each, and this is the highest percentage for them. Surprisingly, rugby and badminton watchers also have the same proportion, which accounting for 27% each. Moreover, 37. 5% of men prefer to watch basketball. By contrast, the least viewers of sports found in fishing with only about 14%. On the other hand, 50% of men prefer to participate in fishing which is the most popular sport for participants in the graph. Additionally, those males who take part in basketball and badminton have the equal percentage of 25 each. Likewise, approximately 20% of men prefer to anticipate in rugby and horse riding and racing. While, below the 12. 5% of them like to take part in football, and this is the lowest for them.
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bar graph provides the information about the proportion of males
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prefer
to
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watching
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sports
, and those
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men
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who
choose to
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take part
in
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different
types of
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sports
activities in a country.

Overall
, the percentage of males
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who
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prefer
to
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watching
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sports
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events
are higher than that of
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men
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who
like to participate in it.
However
,
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only
in fishing activity
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men
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partipants
are more than that of watchers.

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begin
with, the proportion of spectators in football and horse riding and racing are almost similar with around 48% of each, and this is the highest percentage for them.
Surprisingly
, rugby and badminton watchers
also
have the same proportion, which accounting for 27% each.
Moreover
, 37. 5% of
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men
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prefer
to
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watch
basketball. By contrast, the least viewers of
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sports
found in fishing with
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only
about 14%.

On the other hand
, 50% of
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men
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prefer
to participate in fishing which is the most popular
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sport
for participants in the graph.
Additionally
, those males
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who
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take part
in basketball and badminton have the equal percentage of 25 each.
Likewise
, approximately 20% of
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men
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prefer
to anticipate in rugby and horse riding and racing. While, below the 12. 5% of them like to
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take part
in football, and this is the lowest for them.
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IELTS academic The column graph shows the percentage of males in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports.

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