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the maps of Riversdale University between 1973 and 2010

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The main changes in the maps of Riversdale University between 1973 and 2010 is depicted in the distinction maps. It is apparent from the information that the campus maps have several significant changes. In the year of 1973, both sporting fields and oval were located in the northwest of Riversdale University. Below both facilities was located a natural resource which had some trees. Adjacent to these facilities was the main road and a bridge which were located not too far from the oval building. Across the main road, there are several buildings such as economic, fine arts, social sciences, home of law and library. Then, the student union, car park, tram stop, administration and science building are situated in the east. In contrast, Improvement had been made to service facilities in the 37-year period. Some trees in natural resource were cut down in order to make a second car park nearby the tram stop and medical schools building which was planned in 2019. In 2010, one bridge added to the main road and the student union relocated in north of the existing sport centre. The library was expanded in the same location as in 1973. South of this, both law and social sciences building combined into one room. Additionally, fine art was replaced by information sciences whereas the science, economic and administration building were no change.
The
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in the maps of
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Riversdale
University between 1973 and 2010
is depicted
in the distinction maps. It is apparent from the information that the campus maps have several significant
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changes
.

In the year of 1973, both sporting fields and oval
were located
in the northwest of
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Riversdale
University. Below both facilities
was located
a natural resource which had
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some
trees. Adjacent to these facilities was the
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main
road and a bridge which
were located
not too far from the oval
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building
. Across the
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main
road, there are several
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buildings
such as economic, fine arts, social
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sciences
, home of law and library. Then, the student union, car park, tram
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stop
, administration and
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science
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building
are situated
in the east.

In contrast
, Improvement had
been made
to service facilities in the 37-year period.
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Some
trees in natural resource were
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cut
down in order to
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make
a second car park nearby the tram
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stop
and medical schools
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building
which
was planned
in 2019. In 2010, one bridge
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added
to the
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main
road and the student union relocated in north of the existing sport
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centre
. The library
was expanded
in the same location as in 1973. South of this, both law and social
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sciences
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building
combined into one room.
Additionally
, fine art
was replaced
by information
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sciences
whereas the
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science
, economic and administration
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building
were no
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change
.
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