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The maps of beneath show the town of stokeford in 2000 and 2020.

The maps of beneath show the town of stokeford in 2000 and 2020. Eq83b

The two maps give information about the city 2008 2020 lot of modification can be observed during the recent development. First of all, according to the 2020th map of the garden was a close to the road, but it replaced with the retirement houses, As well as the area was diminished and connected to the short Road. Looking more closely at the map, the farmland in the city which was situated in south west corner beside the river stock. It was also altered and went to the along side of the bridge in the north-east corner. One of the new road was constructed between the shops in the Northwest corner nearby the post office and key houses. To sum up, between the actual map of the stokeford town centre and the development of 2020 a lot of modification were happened. On the other hand the city has had been well planned with more Road facilities. On the other hand farmland had also be replaced and built other side of the road.

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 give information about the city 2008 2020 lot of modification can be observed
 during the recent development.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, according to the 2020th You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of the garden was a close to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it replaced with the retirement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, As well
 as the area was diminished
 and connected to the short Road.

Looking more closely
 at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
, the farmland in the city which was situated
 in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
 corner beside the river stock. It was also
 altered and went to the Did you mean "alongside"?alongside
along side
 of the bridge in the north-east corner. One of the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was constructed
 between the shops in the Northwest corner nearby the post office and key This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

To sum up, between the actual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of the Possible spelling mistake found.stoke ford
stokeford
 town Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and the development of 2020 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 modification were happened
. On the other hand
 the city has had been well planned with more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 facilities. On the other hand
 farmland had also
Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "been".been
be
 replaced and built other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. 