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the export earnings of china

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The chart illustrates one country’s national export earnings in the years of 2015 and 2016, dividing into different product categories. The table is with the information of changes in the category-wise export income, during the one year of period from 2015 to 2016. Overall, in between this one year time, categories like petroleum products, engineered goods, textiles and agricultural products have experienced growth in their export earning values. At the same time, there has been a slight declination in the earning of foreign currency in the business of gems and jewellery. Petroleum products and engineered goods are the backbone of the country’s export business. Petroleum products have experienced an annual growth of 3% during 2015-2016 calendar and stand in the 1st export earner sector for the country, contributing 62 billion dollar to the nation. "Engineered goods" in the 2nd rank, which has earned around 61 billion dollar for the nation in 2016. The annual growth of this sector is 8. 5%. The third position belongs to the sector called” gems and jewellery”, inspite of seeing 5. 18% declination annually, this sector has earned 50 billion dollar in 2016. Agriculture and textiles products have jointly taken the fourth position, contributing an equal share of 40 billon dollar to the nation’s total export income in 2016. These two sectors have observed 0. 81% and 15. 24% annual growth in their business, respectively.

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