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The diagram illustrates modification of the road that leads to the city hospital. The changes that took place in 2010 makes it more convenient for the public to reach the city hospital.

The diagram illustrates modification of the road that leads to the city hospital. The changes that took place in 2010 makes it more convenient for the public to reach the city hospital. ewaeG
The diagram illustrates modification of the road that leads to the city hospital. The changes that took place in 2010 makes it more convenient for the public to reach the city hospital. The first thing to notice is that there were no round abouts in the pervious route. The introduction of the round about makes it easier for the traffic to move on the road. Perviously there was only one parking for the staff and public which could have caused inconveniene owing to this fact there are a number of vehicles that are parked near or in the hospital. Back in 2007 bus station was directly connected to the path that leads to the hospital but after the changes took place we can see that the bus station is moved to the left side. As soon as we enter city road we can notice that there is a round about which make it easier for the travellers to move in any direction they would like. It is generally true to say that the changes that took place over the years has helped in traffic management and leads to fast movement of vehicles. Hospital is a critical place and should have less complicated routes due to the fact that emergencies can occur anytime. To conclude, It is evident that the developments that took place have a benefical impact.
The diagram illustrates modification of the road that leads to the city
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in the
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pervious
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The
introduction of the round about
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makes
it easier for the traffic to
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move
on the road.
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Perviously
there was
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only
one parking for the staff and public which could have caused
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inconveniene
owing to this fact there are a number of vehicles that
are parked
near or in the
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hospital
. Back in 2007 bus station was
directly
connected to the path that leads to the
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hospital
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but
after the
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changes
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took
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place
we can
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see
that the bus station is
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moved
to the
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left
side.

As
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as we enter city road we can notice that there is a round about which
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make
it easier for the
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travellers
to
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move
in any direction they would like. It is
generally
true to say that the
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changes
that
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took
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place
over the years has
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helped
in traffic management and leads to
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fast
movement of vehicles.
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Hospital
is a critical
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place
and should have less complicated routes due to the fact that emergencies can occur anytime.
To conclude
, It is evident that the developments that
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took
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place
have a
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benefical
impact.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates modification of the road that leads to the city hospital. The changes that took place in 2010 makes it more convenient for the public to reach the city hospital.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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