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evaluate the two maps shown of the same place bur in different years

evaluate the two maps shown of the same place bur in different years G3xMQ
the two pictures show a map of the town centre in 2 different time zones and the changes that have occurred, the first noticeable change was the hotel that has been expanded as well as steggle farm has been improved into a streggle road as the land was overtaken by concrete. the shops have expanded as well as houses, in 1700 there was only one house on the feild while now there’s 2 rows of them goodie farm transformed into a car park that residents use to park their car the house in st labours lane has been constructed into a supermarket and the stables have been converted into a block of flat apartments
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the
two pictures
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show
a map of the town
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centre
in 2
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different
time zones and the
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changes
that have occurred, the
first
noticeable
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change
was the hotel that has
been expanded
as well
as

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steggle
farm has been
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improved
into a
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streggle
road as the land
was overtaken
by concrete.
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the
shops have expanded
as well
as
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houses
, in 1700 there was
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only
one
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house
on the
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feild
while
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now
Did you mean "there're 2 rows"?
there’s 2 rows
of them

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goodie
farm transformed into a car park that residents
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use
to park their car

the
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house
in st
Possible spelling mistake. 'labours' is British English.
labours
lane has
been constructed
into a supermarket

and the stables have
been converted
into a block of flat
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apartments
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IELTS academic evaluate the two maps shown of the same place bur in different years

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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