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The maps illustrates how Foster road have developed after installation of new roads for bicycles, crossing and trees.

The maps illustrates how Foster road have developed after installation of new roads for bicycles, crossing and trees. NAxb
The maps illustrates how Foster road have developed after installation of new roads for bicycles, crossing and trees. Overall, as result of reconstruction Foster road became more wider and fresher. Before installation, road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue was divided into two crossings, one side for going forward, another for going back. In addition, there is no bicycle roads before and cyclists drove on sidewalks. In general view, carriageway was not colorful and attractive, because of lack of plants. After reconstruction of road, Foster road got a new crossing and bicycle roads. There are considerable growth of the street, it became more wider. Furthermore, after installation the road divided into three parts and have a three directions. From the both sides in SE 84th and 85th Avenue there are new trees, which added attractiveness for essential view of the road.
The maps
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how Foster
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road
have developed after installation of new
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roads
for bicycles, crossing and trees.

Overall
, as result of reconstruction Foster
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road
became
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more wider
and fresher.

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Before
installation,
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road
between SE 84th and 85th Avenue
was divided
into two crossings, one side for going forward, another for going back.
In addition
, there is no bicycle
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roads
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before
and cyclists drove on sidewalks.
In general
view, carriageway was not colorful and attractive,
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because
of lack of plants.

After reconstruction of
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road
, Foster
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road
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got
a new crossing and bicycle
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roads
. There are considerable growth of the street, it became
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more wider
.
Furthermore
, after installation the
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road
divided into three parts and have a three directions. From the both sides in SE 84th and 85th Avenue there are new trees, which
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added
attractiveness for essential view of the
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road
.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrates how Foster road have developed after installation of new roads for bicycles, crossing and trees.

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141 words
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