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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee. 81em

The picture illustrates the proposed changes to the Foster Road. There are few changes that were suggested and infographic illustrates the image of the street before and how it will look if these changes will be accepted. The main addition that differs from the previous picture is street trees. There are trees on both sides of the road, around 8 on the right and 6 on the left. Moreover, second proposed change is making sidewalks wider, because of which road itself in the second picture looks smaller and has only 3 lines. The other suggestion was adding bicycle lanes, that are painted light grey on the picture. Moreover, it was proposed to add new crossing at the end of the street, which connects two sides of the road, that will become smaller in comparison to the previous state. In the picture 'before' it has 4 lines along with cars could go, and after all suggested changes it will have only three, as was drawn in the picture.

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picture
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changes
 to the Foster You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
. There are few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 that were suggested
 and infographic illustrates the image of the street This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and how it will look if these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
. The main addition that differs from the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
 is street trees. There are trees on both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, around 8 on the right and 6 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. Moreover
, second proposed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is making sidewalks wider, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 itself in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
 looks smaller and has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 3 lines. The other suggestion was adding bicycle lanes, that are painted
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grey
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
. Moreover
, it was proposed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 new crossing at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the street, which connects two sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, that will become smaller in comparison
 to the previous state. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
 'This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
' it has 4 lines along with cars could go, and after all
 suggested You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 it will have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 three, as was drawn
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
. 