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The diagrams detail the present construction of a sports centre and plans for its renovation.

The diagrams detail the present construction of a sports centre and plans for its renovation. 76n2

The diagrams detail the present construction of a sports centre and plans for its renovation. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are plans to remove the outdoor courts and expand the gym with additional facilities for swimming, changing, dancing, and activities largely unrelated to exercise like shopping and having coffee. At the moment, the university’s main building is flanked by large outdoor courts. The plan is to remove the western courts in favour of a leisure pool larger in size than the current pool, which will itself remain unchanged during renovations. The entire main building will not undergo alterations including the changing rooms, reception and seating area. The only slight exception is that the gym on the northern end of the building will be lengthened eastwards and connect with two new adjoining dance studios. The outdoor court on the eastern side will be replaced by a sports hall and to the southeast of the sports hall the university will add an additional changing room (which is mirrored by the same room in the southwestern corner of the plans) and an abutting cafe to the west. The large entrance area will not be impeded in any way but a new sports shop will open next to the westernmost changing room.

The diagrams detail the present construction of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
 for its renovation. Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
 to remove the outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 and expand the gym with additional facilities for swimming, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
, dancing, and activities largely
 unrelated to exercise like shopping and having coffee.

At the moment, the university’s main building is flanked
 by large outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 is to remove the western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of a leisure pool A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.larger
larger in size
 than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 pool, which will itself remain unchanged during renovations. The entire main building will not undergo alterations including the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
, reception and seating area. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 slight exception is that the gym on the northern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the building will be lengthened
 eastwards and connect with two new adjoining dance studios.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 on the eastern side will be replaced
 by a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall and to the southeast of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall the university will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 an additional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 (which is mirrored
 by the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 in the southwestern corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans)
 and an abutting 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 to the west. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 large entrance area will not be impeded
 in any way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop will open next
 to the westernmost You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. 