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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee. JakB

Previously, before the redevelopment of infrastructure in our part of the city began, Foster Road, which is located between southeast 84 and 85 Avenues, was first very hot in the summer. It was very dangerous for cyclists to pass, as there was no room for them on the four-lane road, as well as on the narrow sidewalks. With the arrival of the new mayor, life has become better. The factory in the city center was razed to the ground and moved to the north of the city, which reduced the traffic on our road from 3 to 2 two cars. Because of this, a 2-lane road was installed on our street, and the infrastructure was upgraded by converting dirt roads into concrete streets. For the vacant space, they installed a bicycle lane, widened the sidewalk and planted trees on them. In addition, we started landscaping the city, in addition to our street. Summing up, we can conclude that the infrastructure is made for people, as it has become better and it is possible that in the future it will be possible to build the cities of the future.

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before
 the redevelopment of infrastructure in our part of the city began, Foster You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
, which is located
 between southeast 84 and 85 Avenues, was first
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very
 hot in the summer. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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dangerous
 for cyclists to pass, as there was no room for them on the four-lane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, as well
 as on the narrow sidewalks.

With the arrival of the new mayor, life has become better. The factory in the city center was razed
 to the ground and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the north of the city, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the traffic on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 from 3 to 2 two cars. Because of this
, a 2-lane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was installed
 on our street, and the infrastructure was upgraded
 by converting dirt You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 into concrete streets. For the vacant space, they installed a bicycle lane, widened the sidewalk and planted trees on them. In addition
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 landscaping the city, in addition
 to our street.

Summing up, we can conclude that the infrastructure is made
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, as it has become better and it is possible that in the future it will be possible to build the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 of the future. 