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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below. 3qEX
The given pie charts show the comparartive data of educational attainment of females in Someland between 1945 and 1995. As is observed, in 1995 a greater number of women who reaceived no schooling and dropped out at third grade made up the bulk with each accounting for 35% of the total. Moreover, almost a quarter female finished their sixth and ninth class at 15% and 10% respectively. In the meanwhile, a tiny fraction of women made it to their 12th grade which is 4%. It is worth noting that their was no postgraduate women and only 1% women completing their first degree certificates. In contrast, education scenario in Someland in 1995 witnessed a progessive improvement as their was a near fivefold increase in the the higher education at attendances by 50%. Subsequently, a fifthth of them completed their postgraduation. The remaning women who finished twelveth grade represented 12% and studyng till 9th grades came in at 10%.
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comparartive
data of educational attainment of females in
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Someland
between 1945 and 1995.

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is observed
, in 1995 a greater number of
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women
who
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reaceived
no schooling and dropped out at third
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grade
made up the bulk with each accounting for 35% of the total.
Moreover
, almost a quarter female finished their sixth and ninth
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class
at 15% and 10%
respectively
. In the meanwhile, a tiny fraction of
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women
made it to their 12th
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grade
which is 4%. It is worth noting that
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their
was no postgraduate
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women
and
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only
1%
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women
completing their
first
degree certificates.

In contrast
, education scenario in
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Someland
in 1995 witnessed a
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progessive
improvement as
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their
was a near fivefold increase in
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the the
higher education at attendances by 50%.
Subsequently
, a
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fifthth
of them completed their
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postgraduation
. The
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remaning
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women
who finished
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twelveth
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grade
represented 12% and
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studyng
till 9th
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grades
came in at 10%.
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.

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157 words
6.0
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