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The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990,2000 and 2010.

The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010. XWXg
The pie chart demonstrated the dynamics of the number of students who graduated from four various fields at the National University in a non- specified country. The date is provided in percent measurements for a decade with a focus on years 1990, 2000 and 2010. Overall, the great number of graduates of the university started being granted in the field of computer science throughout the period. However, while business lost its popularity among students, two of the remaining fields saw no change in their proportion. Remarkably, the percentage of students enrolled in computer science showed an exponential growth. Its initial 30% ended the period at 45%. In stark contrast, however, the figure of students in business witnessed a dramatic fall. Its initial index 30% halved until 15% in 2010. The indication for medicine recorded unchanged figure at 25% in the final year, despite a peak in the middle of the span. The amount of students in law recovered their initial proportion of 15% at the end after a low in the middle of the period.
The pie chart demonstrated the dynamics of the number of
students
who graduated from four various fields at the National University in a non- specified country. The date
is provided
in percent measurements for a decade with a focus on years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

Overall
, the great number of graduates of the university
started
being granted
in the field of computer science throughout the period.
However
, while business lost its popularity among
students
, two of the remaining fields
saw
no
change
in their proportion.

Remarkably
, the percentage of
students
enrolled in computer science
showed
an exponential growth. Its initial 30% ended the period at 45%.

In stark contrast,
however
, the figure of
students
in business witnessed a dramatic fall. Its initial index 30% halved until 15% in 2010. The indication for medicine recorded unchanged figure at 25% in the final year, despite a peak in the middle of the span. The amount of
students
in law recovered their initial proportion of 15% at the
end
after a low in the middle of the period.
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IELTS academic The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

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