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The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the road around the hospital, while the first map shows pictures of the year 2007, the second depicts structure in 2010.

The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the road around the hospital, while the first map shows pictures of the year 2007, the second depicts structure in 2010. rYdeN
The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the road around the hospital, while the first map shows pictures of the year 2007, the second depicts structure in 2010. Overall, in course of three years road outside the hospital has been completely transformed. Previously parking of car and public was at same place, but it has been seprated after three years. Bus station for buses came in exisistence in 2010 as there were only 6 bus stops before. Moreover, 2 roundabout also constructed, adjoined to bus station. by Map of 2007, southeast side of hospital was being used by members of public and staff togetherly for parking, As well as there was 3 stops for buses in the same spot, between six stops for buses, exists the hospital road, coonnected to the city road. in 2010, the entire structure has been reconstructed except city road and main hospital road. By removing three bus stops, which were suituited at north east corner of hospital, this place is only left for staff parking. new paring place has been added to facilitate visitors of hospital. At south west side a station for buses is built which is connected to two roundabouts.
The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the
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road
around the
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hospital
, while the
first
map
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shows
pictures of the year 2007, the second depicts structure in 2010.
Overall
, in course of three years
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road
outside the
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hospital
has been completely transformed. Previously parking of car and public was at same place,
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but
it has been
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seprated
after three years. Bus station for buses came in
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exisistence
in 2010 as there were
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only
6 bus
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stops
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before
.
Moreover
, 2 roundabout
also
constructed, adjoined to bus station.

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by
Map of 2007, southeast side of
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hospital
was being
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used
by members of public and staff
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togetherly
for parking,
As well
as there was 3
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stops
for buses in the same spot, between six
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stops
for buses, exists the
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hospital
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road
,
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coonnected
to the city road.

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in
2010, the entire structure has
been reconstructed
except city
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road
and main
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hospital
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road
. By removing three bus
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stops
, which were
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suituited
at
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north east
corner of
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hospital
, this place is
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only
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left
for staff parking.
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new
paring place has been
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added
to facilitate visitors of
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hospital
. At
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south west
side a station for buses
is built
which
is connected
to two roundabouts.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the road around the hospital, while the first map shows pictures of the year 2007, the second depicts structure in 2010.

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