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Internet users by gender coming from different locations

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The bar graph gives information about the proportion of Internet users according to sex in the USA, Europe and the rest of the world. Overall, the greatest number of internet users are mostly men who are from Europe, with its figure alone in equivalent to the entire percentage for women in various locations. A vast majority of the male population residing in Europe uses the internet making a record at 80%, which exceeds the rate of their female counterpart approximately four times. As men in the rest of the world have a cumulative figure of about three quarters, roughly six in ten males in the USA are using the web. Meanwhile, about a third of females coming from the USA makes use of the internet, which is twice lesser than that of the percentage of males from the same location. While the number for women from the rest of the world is just marginally lower than this, it is still higher than the record of those women users of the web coming from Europe which reached just below 20%.
The bar graph gives information about the proportion of Internet users according to sex in the USA, Europe and the rest of the world.

Overall
, the greatest number of internet users are
mostly
men
who are from Europe, with its figure alone in equivalent to the entire percentage for women in various locations.

A vast majority of the male population residing in Europe
uses
the internet making a record at 80%, which exceeds the rate of their female counterpart approximately four times. As
men
in the rest of the world have a cumulative figure of about three quarters, roughly six in ten males in the USA are using the web.

Meanwhile, about a third of females coming from the USA
makes
use
of the internet, which is twice lesser than that of the percentage of males from the same location. While the number for women from the rest of the world is
just
marginally
lower than this, it is
still
higher than the record of those women users of the web coming from Europe which reached
just
below 20%.
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IELTS academic Internet users by gender coming from different locations

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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