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How do UK unemployed spent the time in the year 1982

How do UK unemployed spent the time in the year 1982 KGXWM
This table examines how the unemployed residents in the United Kingdom spent their time 29 years ago in 1982. Overall, it has been categorized into different sections, including housework, shopping, job hunting, visiting friends or relatives, and totally covers all activities a person might perform. Based on the gender and sleeping habits, it divides the examinees into men and women, and morning and evening ones, respectively. The chart argues that 49% of unemployed morning women spent their time doing household chores. That is the most frequent activity presented. On the other hand, staying in bed for afternoon men, playing Sport for morning women, and drinking for both morning and afternoon women are the least favorite leisure activity with only 1%. Apparently, the most frequent activity for morning men is job hunting with 22%. This number, for morning women, is housework, as mentioned, with 49%. For afternoon men, it pertains to TV and for afternoon women that goes back to housework as well.
This table examines how the unemployed residents in the

United Kingdom spent their time 29 years ago in 1982.

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been categorized
into
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different
sections,

including housework, shopping, job hunting, visiting friends or

relatives, and
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covers all
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activities
a person might

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perform
. Based on the gender and sleeping habits, it divides
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the


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examinees
into
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men
and
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women
, and
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morning
and evening ones,

respectively
.

The chart argues that 49% of unemployed
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morning
women

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spent
their time doing household chores.
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the
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most


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frequent
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activity
presented.
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, staying in bed
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for


afternoon
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men
, playing Sport for
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morning
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women
, and drinking

for both
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morning
and afternoon
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women
are the least favorite

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leisure
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activity
with
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only
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Apparently
, the most frequent
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activity
for
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morning
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men
is job

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hunting
with 22%. This number, for
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morning
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women
,
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is


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housework
, as mentioned, with 49%. For afternoon
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men
,
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it


pertains to TV and for afternoon
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women
that goes back to

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housework
as well
.
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IELTS academic How do UK unemployed spent the time in the year 1982

Academic
  American English
19 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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