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The maps illustrate the difference between a bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time.

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The maps illustrate the difference between a bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time. In 2000, the bookstore was located inside a rectangular area where its entrance and everything was placed. Books about travel were near to the entrance, new books and service desk were on the right side of the bookstore and can be seen after passing through the entrance. They remained the same until now. Looking at the changes made, there is now a cafe in the southern part of the store at the non-fiction store, and three tables and chairs are also added in the middle of the library. The fiction section on the right side of the corner was replaced by non-fiction books. Also, the fiction section before, which covered almost the entire section of the store, was divided into other genres like art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction. And lastly, there is no more rectangular area covering the entire bookstore now, as compared to 2000. Overall, the arrangement and locations of different book genres are changed, three items remained the same while an additional service is also provided.
The maps illustrate the difference between a bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time.

In 2000, the bookstore
was located
inside a rectangular area where its entrance and everything
was placed
.
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Books
about travel were near to the entrance, new
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books
and service desk were on the right side of the bookstore and can be
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seen
after passing through the entrance. They remained the same until
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now
. Looking at the
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changes
made, there is
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now
a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the southern part of the store at the non-fiction store, and three tables and chairs are
also
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added
in the middle of the library. The fiction section on the right side of the corner
was replaced
by non-fiction
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books
.
Also
, the fiction section
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before
, which covered almost the entire section of the store,
was divided
into other genres like art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction. And
lastly
, there is no more rectangular area covering the entire bookstore
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now
, as compared to 2000.

Overall
, the arrangement and locations of
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different
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book
genres are
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changed
, three items remained the same while an additional service is
also
provided.
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