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Many Criminals Commit Further Crimes as Soon as They Released From Prison

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It is true that after the criminal got out of the prison most of them got committed prime again. The reason causes for this tendency are varied and there are numvers of solutions which can ve taken into consideration to tackle this problem There are a host of reasons for this problem. One of the issue associated with this is that most of the criminals after getting released got discriminated from society which made them easily engage in criminal activities once again. Another alarming problem is that most of the offenders does not afford enough money for their living which lead to their robbery or shoplifting. A number of solution should be taken into consideration. One solution to this problem is for the government to give job opportunities for the criminal which help them afford their cost of living. Another visible solution is that the government shout threaten the sentence for relapse offender In conclusion, there are various causes for these problems, and appropriate step need to be taken to address the problems
It is true that after the
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out of the prison most of them
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committed prime again. The reason causes for this tendency
are varied
and there are
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solutions
which can ve taken into consideration to tackle this
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host
of reasons for this
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problem
. One of the issue associated with this is that most of the
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criminals
after getting released
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got
discriminated from society which made them
easily
engage in
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criminal
activities once again. Another alarming
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problem
is that most of the offenders does not afford
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enough
money for their living which lead to their robbery or shoplifting. A number of
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solution
should
be taken
into consideration. One
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solution
to this
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problem
is for the
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government
to give job opportunities for the
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criminal
which
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help
them afford their cost of living. Another visible
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solution
is that the
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government
shout threaten the sentence for relapse offender
In conclusion
, there are various causes for these
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problems
, and appropriate step need to
be taken
to address the
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problems
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IELTS academic Many Criminals Commit Further Crimes as Soon as They Released From Prison

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172 words
5.5
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