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The diagram shows French blue mussel culture

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The diagram displays French blue mussel culture in various states. The process starts with the sailing of Adult French blue mussels which are 50 mm long at 15 months then step for spawning and fecondation with Trochophore larvae at stage 3-4 weeks and mussels 0. 3 mm long, it converts into veliger larvae at the stage of 2-9 days. After it converts in metamorphosis & settlement at the stage of 3 months mussels grow shells The shells divide into two parts on-bottom subtidal and coconut fibre rope, if uses for fibre rope it can use for intertidal or subtidal after 6 weeks of growth and the mussels transfer to ropes with longline or bouchot. Moreover, it is mixed up at mechanical harvesting with declumping and grading it converts into products. Overall, The process starts with a seed and after many uses, it reverts into seeds after many procedures of industrial uses and gets final product.
The diagram displays French blue
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mussel
culture in various states.

The process
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starts
with the sailing of Adult French blue
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mussels
which are 50 mm long at 15 months then step for spawning and
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fecondation
with
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Trochophore
larvae at stage 3-4 weeks and
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mussels
0. 3 mm long, it converts into veliger larvae at the stage of 2-9 days. After it converts in metamorphosis & settlement at the stage of 3 months
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mussels
grow shells

The shells divide into two parts on-bottom
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subtidal
and coconut
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fibre
rope, if
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uses
for
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fibre
rope it can
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use
for intertidal or
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subtidal
after 6 weeks of growth and the
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mussels
transfer to ropes with
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longline
or
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bouchot
.

Moreover
, it
is mixed
up at mechanical harvesting with
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declumping
and grading it converts into products.

Overall
, The process
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starts
with a seed and after
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many
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uses
, it reverts into seeds after
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many
procedures of industrial
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uses
and
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gets
final product.

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