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The maps illustrate the data about the changes which took place in the art gallery from 2005 to the present

The maps illustrate the data about the changes which took place in the art gallery from 2005 to the present R0rVo

The maps illustrate the data about the changes which took place in the art gallery from 2005 to the present Overall, the most significant change is the disappearance of exhibition room 4 and replaced by temporary room and children’s area. In 2005, the cafe shop was located to the northwest of the reception, but later the gallery shop has built up and smaller than the original size to create more space for constructed new lifts. Besides, the gallery office next to the café was removed and made way for the instruction of vending machine, while the original size of exhibition room 4 also become split off and replaced by a temporary room and children’s area. Moreover, all of 3 other exhibition rooms, reception, entrance hall and entrance remain unchanged.

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changes
 which took place in the art gallery from 2005 to the present

Overall
, the most significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the disappearance of exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 4 and replaced by temporary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and children’s area.

In 2005, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 shop was located
 to the northwest of the reception, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 later the gallery shop has built up and smaller than the original size to create more space for constructed new lifts. Besides
, the gallery office next
 to the café was removed
 and made way for the instruction of vending machine, while the original size of exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 4 also
 become Possible agreement error. The noun 'split' seems to be countable, so consider using: "splits".splits
split
 off and replaced by a temporary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and children’s area. Moreover
, all of 3 other exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
, reception, entrance hall and entrance remain unchanged. 