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Children spend time with parents

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Two bar charts below show us how much time children spend with their parents on weekdays and weekends which is divided into 5 age groups. Firstly, during weekdays, children spend most of their time at school so they just have a little time to interact with their parents. Kids for all age groups spend about 7 hours with their mother while the time they spend with their father was just about 1 to 2. 5 hours per day. Children from age groups 0-1, 4-5, 8-9 spend more time for their father than the kids at the age of 2-3 and 6-7. They spend about 9 hours per day interacting with both their father and mother on weekdays. Secondly, on the weekends, children spend most of their time at home so they have more time to spend with their parents than during weekdays. As a result, at all age groups, kids spend 8. 5 to 10. 5 hours per Saturday and Sunday with their parents while there are just 9 hours on weekdays. Moreover, during weekends, they spend less time with neither their mother nor father. They spend just about 0. 5 to 1. 5 hours per day with their father and 4 to 4. 5 hours with their mother. To sum up, children are most likely to spend their time with their mother rather than their father during weekdays while on weekends, they spend more time interacting with both their dad and their mom.
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IELTS academic Children spend time with parents

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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