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Company wants to open the new restaurant

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The map shows the centre of parij. A company wants to open new restaurant in the area. The map shows to possibl locations for the restaurant. there are two locations. location1 situated in the north of river. Location1 is opposite the park. the Maritime museum is the west of location 1. Bir Hakim bridge is in front of location1. The aquarium is situated in the east of location 1. location 2is between Eiffel tower and art gallery. The left of bankon the bottom the left of the location 2. Debility bridge is the east oflocation2. sport centre near to the location2.
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parij
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company
wants to open new restaurant in the area. The map
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shows
to
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possibl
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locations
for the restaurant.
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there
are two
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locations
.
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location1
situated in the north of river.
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Location1
is opposite the park.
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the
Maritime museum is the west of
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location
1.
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Bir
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Hakim
bridge is in front of
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location1
. The aquarium
is situated
in the east of
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location
1.
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location
2is between
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Eiffel tower
and art gallery. The
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left
of
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bankon
the bottom the
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left
of the
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location
2. Debility bridge is the east oflocation2.
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sport
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centre
near to the
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location2
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IELTS academic Company wants to open the new restaurant

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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