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The pie charts illustrate the average amount of three different types of nutrients in typical everyday meals at United States and all of these nutrients mentioned in the topic has been warned to be unhealthy when consumed too much. Looking from an overall perspective, it is clearly shown that there are 3 types of nutrients including sodium, saturated fat and added sugar. Dinner can be seen taking up the most in three of the nutrients except for added sugar. A quick glance at the data suggests that the level of sodium in breakfast and snacks are 14% which makes them the lowest while the highest is dinner with up to 43% and the rest is lunch at 29%. The figures for saturated fat are slightly different due to the fact that fats in lunch increases from 14% to 21% while the rest has dropped a bit with 37%, 26% and 16%, respectively. A noticeable change in the sugar chart is that snacks are now the dominant figure whereas to dinner is only around 23% and lunch containing 19% sugar while breakfast remains the same 16%.
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them the lowest while the highest is dinner with up to 43% and the rest is lunch at 29%. The figures for saturated
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due to the fact that fats in lunch increases from 14% to 21% while the rest has dropped a bit with 37%, 26% and 16%,
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around 23% and lunch containing 19% sugar while breakfast remains the same 16%.
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