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The provided bar chart represents the value free time of men and women who are enjoyed in five part of employment condition including (employed part time unemployed retiredHousewives)

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IELTS academic The provided bar chart represents the value free time of men and women who are enjoyed in five part of employment condition including (employed part time unemployed retiredHousewives)

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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