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The maps illustrate the changes of a museum between 1957 and 2007

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The two maps depict the developments of a museum from 1957 to 2007. The initial impressions from the map is that the museum has changed considerably over the 50-year period with six new features can be seen in the second map. In 1957, there was a small path from the main road leading to the main hall of the museum. Standing from the entrance, we could see a local history room in our left, a museum storeroom in our right and a national history exhibition right in front of us. Surrounding the museum was a jungle full of trees. In 2007, many trees, including roadside trees, which could be seen in the 1957 map, were cut down to make space for a car park. The museum was enlarged with a minor improvement. The small path from the road was destructed and we had to walk through the museum souvenir shop in order to get to the main hall of the museum. From there, we could see a reception desk and a café shop in the corner. The national history exhibition had been turned into the local history room. Two new rooms were added for special exhibitons and an education centre.

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museum
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map
 is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
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changed
considerably
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seen
 in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
. In 1957, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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museum
. Standing from the entrance, we could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
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left
, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 storeroom in our right and a national You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 exhibition right in front of us. Surrounding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 was a jungle full of trees. In 2007, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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seen
 in the 1957 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
, were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 space for a car park. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
was enlarged
 with a minor improvement. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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destructed and
 we had to walk through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 souvenir shop in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to the main hall of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
. From there, we could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a reception desk and a café shop in the corner. The national You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 exhibition had been turned
 into the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 room. Two new rooms were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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exhibitons
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centre
. 