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The maps show the changes of the cinema from 1980 to now

The maps show the changes of the cinema from 1980 to now ljK8X

The two infographics depict the modifications of the cinema during the period from 1980 to now. It is obvious that there was a wide-ranging transition in the cinema with more services rooms and modern facilities. It can be clearly seen that in 1980, there were only two cinemas, the first was on the left of the entrance, the second was located opposite the toilet that was near a humorous carpark. In addition, the ticket shop, which was located near to the drink, was on the opposite of cinema 1. At the moment, there were some variations compared to 1980. This cinema was expanded from 2 to 5 rooms and the car park was demolished. Furthermore, the cinema 2 was converted in the top right-hand to set up more three cinema. Thus, cinema 1 was moved next to the toilet that situated near cinema 2. Additionally, in the corner of left side, there were more services rooms, which is food & drink and relax room. Besides, while the tickets room remained unchanged, the DVD was constructed and replaced the drinks.

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cinema
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now
.

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cinema
 with more services You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 and modern facilities.

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seen
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only
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cinemas
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left
 of the entrance, the second was located
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carpark
. In addition
, the ticket shop, which was located
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cinema
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some
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cinema
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rooms
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. Furthermore
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cinema
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. Thus
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cinema
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moved
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cinema
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left
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rooms
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room
. Besides
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