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Write a report on the number of imprisonment in five different country.

Write a report on the number of imprisonment in five different country. xm62b

The bar graph elucidates the number of prisoners in five nations from 1930 to 1980. The figure measured in thousand. At a cursory glance, although all countries witnessed a fluctuation in the figure, Great Britain was the only country had an upward trend throughout period. Considering Australia, there were around 70000 prisoners in 1930, the figure then declined in next three decades, finally, this reached to nearly 40000 and the lowest in the group in 1980. Great Britain had the lowest crime rate in 1930 with just 25000 case, but it increased gradually and reached in the third position in 1980 with 80000 cases as similar as New zealand. Regarding Canada, the USA and Newzealand experienced a oscillation in the number of culprits. The first two countries had the figure more than 100000. In 1930, the rate for Canada was 100000, which increased to 80000 and the USA from 10000 to 120000 in 1980. Similarly, even though New Zealand, had some dramatic decline in the first 2 decades, the later on the figure started to rise and in 1980, there was about 80000 arrests.

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 measured in Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.a thousand
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.

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, Great Britain was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 country had an upward trend throughout period.

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figure
 then declined in next
 three decades, finally
, this reached to nearly
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just
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but
 it increased gradually
 and reached in the third position in 1980 with 80000 cases as similar as If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.New Zealand
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.

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Newzealand
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a
 oscillation in the number of culprits. The first
 two countries had the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 more than 100000. In 1930, the rate for Canada was 100000, which increased to 80000 and the USA from 10000 to 120000 in 1980. Similarly
, even though
 New Zealand, had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 dramatic decline in the first
 2 decades, the Did you mean "latter" (=the second of two items)?latter
later
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started
 to rise and in 1980, there was about 80000 arrests. 