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The maps illustrate the alternations of the Stokeford village over the 80 years-period between 1930 and 2010.

The maps illustrate the alternations of the Stokeford village over the 80 years-period between 1930 and 2010. lX9xJ
The maps illustrate the alternations of the Stokeford village over the 80 years-period between 1930 and 2010. As can be seen, there were various changes in Stokeford while the bridge and the post office stayed unchanged. The most noticeable change was the parts of the garden which was converted to a retirement home for older people. We can obviously see River Stoke located in the East of the Storeford village. Half of the village area was farmland raising many cows by farmers. In addition, Strokeford did not have public places; however, some shops, the post office, and primary school were along the main streets. The striking point is that the garden containing three large houses was situated in the middle of the rural area. The period from 1930 to 2010, in the Northwest, the shops were demolished and converted to more residential places. While the post office, the bridge, and elementary school remained their own locations on the Westside and the East of the main road respectively but there was an expansion of the school buildings which were opposite each other on both sides of the road in 2010. Besides, the two numerous farmlands were destroyed to make way for a lot of new houses. The retirement home and some new roads were built to replace the garden and the large house.
The maps illustrate the alternations of the
Stokeford
village over the 80 years-period between 1930 and 2010.

As can be
seen
, there were various
changes
in
Stokeford
while the bridge and the post office stayed unchanged. The most noticeable
change
was the parts of the garden which
was converted
to a retirement home for older
people
.

We can
obviously
see
River Stoke located in the East of the
Storeford
village. Half of the village area was farmland raising
many
cows by farmers.
In addition
,
Strokeford
did not have public places;
however
,
some
shops, the post office, and primary school were along the main streets. The striking point is that the garden containing three large
houses
was situated
in the middle of the rural area. The period from 1930 to 2010, in the Northwest, the shops
were demolished
and converted to more residential places. While the post office, the bridge, and elementary school remained their
own
locations on the Westside and the East of the main road
respectively
but
there was an expansion of the school buildings which were opposite each other on both sides of the road in 2010.
Besides
, the two numerous farmlands were
destroyed
to
make
way for
a lot of
new
houses
. The retirement home and
some
new roads
were built
to replace the garden and the large
house
.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the alternations of the Stokeford village over the 80 years-period between 1930 and 2010.

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