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the graph below show THE DIFFERENT TYPE OF ACCOMODATIONS CHOSEN BY THE BRITISH WHEN THEY WENT ON HOLIDAYS IN 2012. . summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES FOUR TYPE OF HOUSING ARRANGEMENT ( SELF-CATERING, CARAVAN, CAMPING AND HOTELS) CHOOSEN BY PEOPLE FROM BRITAIN FOR HOLIDAYS IN 2012. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTAGE. OVERALL, IT IS CLEAR THAT STAYING IN HOTEL IS THE MOST PREFERABLE ACCOMODATION CHOOSEN BY THE PEOPLE FROM UK REGARDLESS OF DIFFERENT LOCATIONS. IT CAN CLEARLY SEEN THAT, SELF-CATERING IS ACCOUNTED UNDER 30% IN ENGLAND WHEREAS, IN SCOTLAND IT IS EXACT 30% THEN, IN WALES IT IS LESS THAN 25% AND IN NORTHERN REGION IT IS MERELY ABOVE 10%. MEANWHILE, LIVING IN MOTORIZED VEHICLE IS AROUND 5% ENGLAND, IN SCOLTAND IT MORE THAN 10% HOWEVER, IN WALES IT IS UNDER 10%. IN NORTH SIDE IT IS STATED AS 30%. IT IS VIVID THAT. TENTING IN ENGLAND AND NORTHERN REGION IS SIMILAR WTH AROUND 12%, WHEREAS, IN SCOTLAND AND WALES IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 5% AND 15% RESPECTIVELY ASA RESULT IT IS THE LEAST CHOOSED BY HOLIDAY-MAKERS ON THE OTHER HAND RENTED ROOM IS THE MOST LIKE WAY TO ACCOMODATE WITH MORE THAN 50% IN ENGLISH STATE AND SCOTISH PLACE, HOEWEVER, IT IS LESS THAN 40% IN REST OF REGIONS.
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES FOUR TYPE OF HOUSING ARRANGEMENT
(
SELF-CATERING, CARAVAN, CAMPING AND HOTELS)
CHOOSEN
BY
PEOPLE
FROM BRITAIN FOR HOLIDAYS IN 2012. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN PERCENTAGE.

OVERALL
, IT IS
CLEAR
THAT STAYING IN HOTEL IS THE MOST PREFERABLE
ACCOMODATION
CHOOSEN
BY THE
PEOPLE
FROM UK REGARDLESS OF
DIFFERENT
LOCATIONS.

IT CAN
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, SELF-CATERING
IS ACCOUNTED
UNDER 30% IN ENGLAND WHEREAS, IN SCOTLAND IT IS EXACT 30% THEN, IN WALES IT IS LESS THAN 25% AND IN NORTHERN REGION IT IS
MERELY
ABOVE 10%. MEANWHILE, LIVING IN MOTORIZED VEHICLE IS AROUND 5% ENGLAND, IN
SCOLTAND
IT MORE THAN 10%
HOWEVER
, IN WALES IT IS UNDER 10%. IN NORTH SIDE IT
IS STATED
AS 30%.

IT IS VIVID THAT. TENTING IN ENGLAND AND NORTHERN REGION IS SIMILAR WTH AROUND 12%, WHEREAS, IN SCOTLAND AND WALES IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 5% AND 15%
RESPECTIVELY
ASA RESULT IT IS THE LEAST
CHOOSED
BY HOLIDAY-MAKERS
ON THE OTHER HAND
RENTED ROOM IS THE MOST LIKE WAY TO
ACCOMODATE
WITH MORE THAN 50% IN ENGLISH STATE AND
SCOTISH
PLACE,
HOEWEVER
, IT IS LESS THAN 40% IN REST OF REGIONS.
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