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THE GRAPHS SHOW THE ONLINE SALES OF DIFFERENT PRODUCT CATEGORIES OF THE RETAIL SECTOR IN CANADA IN 2005 AND 2010.

THE GRAPHS SHOW THE ONLINE SALES OF DIFFERENT PRODUCT CATEGORIES OF THE RETAIL SECTOR IN CANADA IN 2005 AND 2010. kxyXR
TEH PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES SALES ON INTERNET OF THE RETAIL INDUSTRY IN FOUR CATEGORIZED GOODS (ELECTRONICS APPLIANCES, FOODS HOME FURNISHING AND VIDEO GAMES) IN CANADA FROM 2005 TO 2010. OVERALL, THE HOTTEST SELLING CATEGORY IS ELECTRONIC DEVICES IN GIVEN PERIOD OF TIME WHEREAS, VISUAL GAMING IS THE LEAST SELL IN FIRST YEARS AND HOUSE FURNITURES IN LAST SPAN. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, APPLIANCE RUNS ON ELECTRCITY IS THE HIGHEST SELLING GOOD IN BOTH YEARS IN BEGINNING IT IS STATED AS 35% AND DECLINES BY 5% IN FINAL PERIOD. AS FAR AS MEALS IS CONCERNED, IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 22% IN 2005 AND SYROCKETED TO 32% IN FIVE YEARS. THE PIE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, HUTS RENOVATING IS STATED AS ONE FOUTH OF TOTAL IN 2005 AND IT DECREASES TO 15% IN 2010. FINALLY, VISUALIZED GAMING IS ACCOUNTED FOR 18% THEN, IT INCLINE TO 23% IN LAST PERIOD.
TEH
PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES SALES ON INTERNET OF THE RETAIL INDUSTRY IN FOUR CATEGORIZED
GOODS
(ELECTRONICS APPLIANCES, FOODS HOME FURNISHING AND VIDEO GAMES) IN CANADA FROM 2005 TO 2010.

OVERALL
, THE HOTTEST SELLING CATEGORY IS ELECTRONIC DEVICES IN
GIVEN
PERIOD OF TIME WHEREAS, VISUAL GAMING IS THE LEAST SELL IN
FIRST
YEARS AND
HOUSE
FURNITURES
IN LAST SPAN.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, APPLIANCE RUNS ON
ELECTRCITY
IS THE HIGHEST SELLING
GOOD
IN BOTH YEARS IN BEGINNING IT
IS STATED
AS 35% AND DECLINES BY 5% IN FINAL PERIOD. AS FAR AS MEALS
IS CONCERNED
, IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 22% IN 2005 AND
SYROCKETED
TO 32% IN FIVE YEARS.

THE PIE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, HUTS RENOVATING
IS STATED
AS ONE
FOUTH
OF TOTAL IN 2005 AND IT DECREASES TO 15% IN 2010.
FINALLY
, VISUALIZED GAMING
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 18% THEN, IT INCLINE TO 23% IN LAST PERIOD.
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