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The maps illustrate marked changes which have taken place at the coastal resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

The maps illustrate marked changes which have taken place at the coastal resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005. VPXQ7
The given maps show what changes were implemented to the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. It is evident that the western area of the river was transformed completely with the construction of new facilities, a similar pattern was observed in the eastern part of the river. Looking at the construction in the western part of the town, a multi-apartment area was built instead of a residential area, similarly as in the northwest part of the city. It is noticeable that the railway was extended from the east to the west near the new multi-apartments, on the contrary side of apartments was built a supermarket. The evidence suggests that in 2005, the airport was constructed behind the school and houses, while the new houses were constructed near the hospital. Furthermore, the forests in the east area of the resort were cut down for the construction of a factory.
The
given
maps
show
what
changes
were implemented
to the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

It is evident that the western
area
of the river
was transformed
completely with the construction of new facilities, a similar pattern
was observed
in the eastern part of the river.

Looking at the construction in the western part of the town, a multi-apartment
area
was built
instead
of a residential
area
,
similarly
as in the northwest part of the city. It is noticeable that the railway
was extended
from the east to the west near the new multi-apartments,
on the contrary
side of apartments
was built
a supermarket.

The evidence suggests that in 2005, the airport
was constructed
behind the school and
houses
, while the new
houses
were constructed
near the hospital.
Furthermore
, the forests in the east
area
of the resort were
cut
down for the construction of a factory.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate marked changes which have taken place at the coastal resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

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