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My house is located in a small quiet village.

My house is located in a small quiet village. J3rKB

My house is located in a small quiet village. That’s a yellow house which consists of 6 rooms: a living room, a kitchen, a toilet, a bathroom and two bedrooms. There are a white leather sofa, a television in the living room. After dinner, my father will turn on the television, choose a great movie and we watch it happily. Next to the living room is the kitchen where is used for cooking and enjoying the meals. In the middle of the room is a dinner table which is made from wood. Two cookers, a fridge and all the necessary stuff for cooking is arranged carefully in the right corner of the room. In the left of the kitchen is a clean toilet. Beside the toilet is the bathroom which is equipped a shower and a bathtub. There are only two rooms upstairs that is my parents’ room and my private room. I’ve decorated my bedroom with adorable wallpaper and many lovely stuffed animals. A single bed is placed next to the window so that I can stargaze before falling asleep. In the opposite of the bed are my desk and my bookshelf that contains many kinds of book. There are also an old television and a piano in my bedroom. I especially love the piano because that was the gift from dad in my birthday. Although my house is not too big but to me that is the most beautiful house in the world.

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. Although my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
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