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The maps depict a number of changes which took place in the cinema from 1980 to now

The maps depict a number of changes which took place in the cinema from 1980 to now NMkBW

The maps depict a number of changes which took place in the cinema from 1980 to now. Overall, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the cinema was totally transformed in a number of different ways, such as car park was disappeared, and there were the cinemas built. In the north of the cinema, the car park was replaced by the cinema 2&3. The male and female toilets directly across the street from the cinema2 are now remain stable. In the east of the cinema, the cinema2 was converted into the cinema 4&5, three cinema rooms instead of the one room line the right wall. In the south-west of the cinema, the cinema1 was relocated to the west and replaced by food drinks and relax room. The ticket room in the southeast remained same, and the drinks room were transformed by a DVD shop. Finally, the entrance on the south side remains the same.

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cinema
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In the south-west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
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