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the diagram below shows the life cycle of an insect called the cicada.

the diagram below shows the life cycle of an insect called the cicada. KG8xw
The picture illustrates the various stage in the life of the cicada. Overall, there are three steps in the process, beginning with the cicada eggs inside of tree branches and ending with the matute cicade moult its old skin and start lay its eggs. The process begin with the cicada eggs clinging inside of the tree trunk. After two to seven months, the eggs start cracking and the larva arises after the eggs crack. The nymph will live underground. Here, the nymphs start digging tunnels which are near tree roots. They spend two to seventeen years to growing and maturing. In this step, the nymphs start creating a hard shell to protect itself. After two to seventeen years, the nymphs grow to the full length and weight and becoming cicada. They will come out underground and begin to moult old skin, which is light brown color shell clinging in the tree trunk. They spend 20-150 minutes to doing this step. After moulting its old skin, they will have a wings and start a new life cycle of an adult cicada.
The picture illustrates the various stage in the life of the cicada.

Overall
, there are three steps in the process, beginning with the cicada eggs inside of
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branches and ending with the
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matute
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cicade
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moult
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skin and
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lay its eggs.

The process
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with the cicada eggs clinging
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inside of
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trunk. After two to seven months, the eggs
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cracking and the larva arises after the eggs crack. The nymph will
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live
underground. Here, the nymphs
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digging tunnels which are near
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roots. They spend two to seventeen years to growing and maturing. In this step, the nymphs
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start
creating a
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hard
shell to protect itself.

After two to seventeen years, the nymphs grow to the full length and weight and becoming cicada. They will
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come
out underground and
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to
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moult
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skin, which is light brown color shell clinging in the
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trunk. They spend 20-150 minutes to doing this step. After
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moulting
its
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skin, they will have a wings and
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a new life cycle of an adult cicada.
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows the life cycle of an insect called the cicada.

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